在这种精神的感召下，那些从善行中受益的人将会用爱，用真诚，用同情用热情好客和慷慨来对待其 他人。 或者

2.Being the beneficiary of a kind of volunteering deeds inspires us to act that way toward a third person and

provides a huge boost to the sound evolution of a nation. 受益于这种志愿者的行为，会使我们用这样的方法对待第三个人，这样就为国家的健康发展提供了巨 大的促进。 最后一句

1.In other words, were there no volunteer spirit, we would never taste the civilization of the modern society. 或者： 2. Simply put, it inspires and boosts the sound evolution of our nation. 简单讲，这种力量激发并促进了我们国家的健康发展。 第三段的展开： 超级无敌结尾段： 版本一：

Any thinking man would admit that our ardent love for life will further guarantee the prosperity of this

life-affirming force which will usher a completely new horizon for the great renewal of our nation. In view of the

importance of such a positive phenomenon, we must, doubtless, establish a coordinated mechanism to ensure its

everlasting rewarding effects on our society. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we

hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost，（I argue.）(90 字) 任何一位有识之士都会承认，我们对于生活的深深的热爱，将会进一步确保这种生命正能量的繁荣，

这种力量将会为我们民族的复兴开创一个全新的局面。正是考虑到这种正面现象的重要性，毫无疑问，我

们将确立一个协调的机制来确保其作用于我们社会的持久的回报效果。只有在一个理性的，繁荣的和健康 的环境中，我们才有可能见证到一个理想的场景，人们能最大化的享受他们的生活.

版本二： 第一句：

To make the world a better place, the positive momentum of this kind shall be made known and followed by

people in every profession and in every corner.

为了让这个世界变成更好的地方，这种正能量应该被这个社会每个行业，每个角落的人所知晓和遵守。

第二句：

It would not be a stretch to say that the world will become a big loving family if good-willing deeds like this

becomes a common practice that happens daily. 不夸张的讲，如果这样的善行能成为每天都发生的行为，那么这个世界将变成一个有爱的大家庭。 第三句：

And once it takes root in the heart of every member of this society, the fruit will be the dazzling light that dispels darkness and creates harmony.

一旦这种品质在每个社会成员的心中扎根，产生的果实将会是炫目的明灯，去除黑暗，创造和谐。

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梦想和目标的第三段：

Taking this topic a step further, a nation must as well draw strength from a higher goal that all of its

members share so that it can grow steadfastly and stably both in economic and in cultural terms. Above all, individuals and organizations alike all need a star, a goal, or better put a dream to navigate us in the great voyage of life. 传统文化： 第二段 第一句：

The picture does demonstrate that, traditional Chinese festivals, the invaluable cultural heritage embodying

our shared belief, spirit and history, have been increasingly neglected by us.

正如上图所示，体现了我们共同的信念、精神和历史的中国传统节日——我们无价的文化遗产，正逐 渐被我们所忽视。 第二句：

It is mournful that such time-honored holidays are playing an ever insignificant role in our lives and gradually declining to the background,

这种历史沉淀的传统竟然渐渐淡化，在我们的生活中扮演越来越不重要的角色，实在令人感伤。 第三句：

Because if they finally become just dead symbols or abstract concepts to be found in dusted books, we would

be in danger of lost our uniqueness as a people who persist into this day with records of continued civilization and become just another state wholly consumed by the prevailing pop culture.

因为如果它们最终只是成为无生命的符号或尘封在书本中的抽象概念的话，我们就会失去作为一个文

明始终未中断的民族的独特性，和世界上很多其它国家一样，仅仅成为一个拥有流行文化的地方。 或者

Traditions like them are powerful cohesive forces that bond us together, giving us clues of our ancestors’

struggles and achievements and infusing sense of pride into us as the direct lineage of great heroes.

它们这样的传统是联系我们的强大凝聚力，它们留有祖先奋斗的痕迹和成就，让我们骄傲，告诉自己， 我们是英雄的传人。 第三段： 版本一 第一句：

Since human civilization evolves by building on the past and probing into the future, the first crucial step for

a society aiming at further growth is to preserve the existing traditions and cultures. 人类文明以基于过去、展望未来的方式不断发展，因此对于一个有志于进步的社会来说，保护好现存

的传统和文化是重要的第一步。 或者 As so often, the past holds the key to the future，the existing traditions and cultures have to be preserved to answer the possible questions to come.

因为过去总是拥有关于未来的答案，所以传统和文化必须保护以回答未来的问题。

第二句：

Fortunately, we have noticed that a series of courses on traditional Chinese culture have been introduced to the high

school classrooms and Confucius Institutions have been established in many countries. This is a good start. 幸运的是我们已经注意到，一系列传统中国文化的课程被引入了中学课堂；孔子学院在很多国家建立。 这是一个好的开始。 版本二 第一句：

Therefore, it is crucial that resources and efforts be devoted to promote these traditions.

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因而，尽人力和物力来提升这些传统是非常重要的。 第二句：

Much can be done. Government agencies, NGOs and the common sector join hands together by organizing

arrays of activities to revitalize the cultural heritages.

我们可以很多。政府部门、民间组织和普通民众应一起协作，组织各种活动来复兴这些文化遗产 第三句：

So that all the people can be actively involved in this campaign and truly realize that traditions are the blood and spirit of a nation.

这样所有人都能积极地参与，切身体会到，文化传承就是一个民族的血液和精神。

有形社会问题的写作步骤 可能用到的主题词：

1． 资源保护(Energy and Resource Saving/reservation) 2． 环境保护( Environmental protection)

3． 人口增长(The growth of China’s population)

4． 家庭暴力(The Problem of Domestic or Family Violence) 5． 社会保障系统/资金(Social security system/fund)

6． 假冒伪劣产品问题( Counterfeits and unqualified products) 7． 食品安全(food safety)/粮食安全（grain security）

8． 消费者权益保护问题( The protection of consumers rights and interests)

9． 知识产权保护问题（Intellectual Property protection） 10. 学术剽窃（academic plagiarism） 11. 节约粮食（grain conservation） 有形社会问题绝对超级模式： 第一段 方式一：

The cartoon jumping into my sight is fairly compelling. As is shown in the picture above, the characters in

the middle of it are doing something thought-provoking and this will enlighten us persistently. The author’s real

purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find the informative information behind it.

映入我眼帘的这幅漫画真的很有意思。如图画中所展示的那样，图画中的中心人物正在做着令人思考

的事情，这样的场景不断的在启发着我们。作者的目的不是图画本身，而是指导我们找到其背后的含义是 什么

方式二：

The cartoon jumping into my sight is fairly compelling. As is shown in the picture above, such

thought-provoking scenes abound in our daily lives and usually prevail with the ever-rapid economic