活动 时间 地点 参与者 活动内容 毕业晚会 6月28日晚上七点 学校礼堂school hall 全体初三学生和老师 1. 邀请校长作演讲; 2. 互赠礼物送祝福; 3. 各班表演精彩节目 4. 要求:1.要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺,连贯; 2.正确使用语态,语法正确,书写整洁。 3.80词左右,开头结尾己给出,不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。 Dear editor,
I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Yours Lihua 【答案】Dear editor,
I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.
This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan. Best wishes, Yours, Li hua 【解析】 【分析】
这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。 【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构
和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
5.(·如皋市实验初中中考模拟) 亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开,你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道,对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。 要点 历史文化 文明行为 身边文明 内容 历史悠久,文化各异;传统节日,多彩习俗(举一例) 相互尊重,以礼相待;互学共鉴,共同成长(或自拟) 校园文明(自拟一点) 注意:1. 词数90词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。 2. 回复必须包括所以要点,可是当发挥,是短文连贯,通顺。 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇: civilized 文明的 Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon. All the best, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette (礼仪). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best.
Li Hua
【解析】 【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。 【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点,写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主,首先要认真读懂图表中的要求,对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括,去粗取精;在写作时目的要明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。 【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette(礼仪),中国是一个礼仪之邦。
6.(·北京中考模拟)4月23日是“世界读书日”,你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书,读好书”的活动。假如你是李华,请你写一封倡议书,向全体同学发出号召。内容包括:应该读什么样的书,以及读书的意义。 提示词语:story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,但写作时要按照应用文格式写,写作时承接短文开头,写出对学生的倡议。
例文点评:例文采用的是一段式,写的是阅读的好处,时态采用的是一般现在时,描述倡议时,描写细致,条理清晰。 高分亮点:
短语:Firstly;Secondly;Finally;a good way to do sth;broaden our knowledge and horizon。
句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。
7.(·北京初三)题目1:
假如你是李华,你们班打算去“希望之家(Hope House)”孤儿院做志愿服务,你打算邀请你们学校的留学生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,告诉他集合的时间和地点,你们将在孤儿院做什么,以及他可以做什么准备。 提示词语:gate,play,tell stories,gift 提示问题:
.When and where will you meet? .What will you do there?
.What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity
【答案】例文How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity at the Hope House. We will meet at