Step2. Presentation: Point out students’ to ? Present some typical test papers to students and let students correct common them in class. ? Show excellent compositions to students. mistakes catch students’ attention and stress the importance of handwriting. 运用的多媒体辅助教学手段：智学网数据 Step 3 Part 1. Standards of a good composition: Comments Summarize the standards of a good composition. ? 书写工整，无乱涂乱画； ? 注意大小写和标点； ? 分三段； ? 无单词拼写、词性和时态错误； ? 主谓一致； ? 恰当使用关联词； ? 简单句表达正确； ? 使用了复杂的句子结构； ? 表达方式多样化，注意长短句搭配； ? 使用了好词好句。 Part 2. Brainstorm: To help students When you introduce a place, what aspects will you write about? brainstorm their input to (location/area, population, history/culture, scenery, climate, put into the writing. local products/specialties) Step4 一、典题示例: 假如你是李华，向你的朋友Jim介绍北京： 1.中国首都，是政治、文化中心； 2.位于中国的北方，人口2100万，占地16400k㎡； 3.历史悠久，有众多旅游景点，如长城、颐和园、故宫等，每年有成千上万的国内外游客到北京参观； 4.美食以北京烤鸭最为出名,愿意当向导带他去品尝。 参考词汇：故宫the Forbidden City； 颐和园 the Summer Palace; 北京烤鸭Peking Duck 词数：120个左右，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 运用的多媒体辅助教学手段：101教育PPT—互动工具—黑板 写出可以从哪些方面描写地点。 Take the item for example to illustrate how to introduce a place. [来源:Zxxk.Com] 二、审题谋篇： 项目 体裁 时态 话题 人称 三、词句推敲： 结论 To help students identify key factors of writing a composition. Invite students to underline sense groups that can be written in fixed expression. 1.中国首都，是政治、文化中心； 2.位于中国的北方，人口2100万，占地16400k㎡； 3.历史悠久，有众多旅游景点，如长城、颐和园、故宫等，每年有成千上万的国内外游客到北京参观； 4.美食以北京烤鸭最为出名,愿意当向导带他去品尝。 Help students collect and advanced phrases sentence types. Make preparations for the difficult part: how to combine sentences. These activities can help 四、Show all the simple sentences. Beijing is the capital of China. It is our country’s political and cultural center. It has a long history. Beijing is situated in the north of China. It covers an area of 16000 square kilometers. It has a population of 21million. Beijing has many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. Millions of people from home and abroad visit Beijing every year. 五、重难点 Part1. How to organise sentences? 1.用同位语和with短语： Beijing is the capital of China. It is our country’s political and cultural center. It has a long history. →Beijing, _______________, is our country’s ____________________ ____ a long history. (the capital of China, political and cultural center, with) 2.巧用介词短语： Beijing is situated in the north of China. It covers an area of 16000 square kilometers. It has a population of 21million. me evaluate whether students have the ability to put them into writing. →Beijing, _______ in the north of China, _____ an area of 16000 square kilometers _____ a population of 21 million. (situated, covers, with) 3.用There be句型、替换成高级词汇： [来源学科网ZXXK] Beijing has many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. →________ many _______________ such as the Great wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. (There are, tourist attractions) 4.善于用定语从句和被动语态： Millions of people from home and abroad visit Beijing every year. →被动：Beijing _______________millions of people from home and abroad every year. →定语从句：There are millions of tourists _______ visit Beijing every year. (is visited by, who) 5.用好连词，顺理成章。 To begin with, Beijing, the capital of China, is our country’s To stress the importance of political and cultural center with a long history. Situated in the conjunction words.