for me and I have carried on it for years． Every time I tick off the resolutions on the list， I am feeling on cloud nine． I know my life has arrived at a crucial stage and I will have to go all out in the new year． Now I put down my new resolutions here． Firstly， I need to sharpen my writing skills，Secondly， …
Su Hua 1 January， Sunny
I felt ashamed of myself when I was reviewing my previous resolutions this morning． I make resolutions every New Year's Day． However， they DON'T WORK! What happens in January stays in January； it rarely makes it to June． \， New You．\over a new leaf． And this time I am crossing my fingers that my new resolutions will be helpful．
【写作内容】
1．用约30个词概括上面两段文字的主要内容； 2．用约120个词谈谈你的观点，内容包括：
（1）新年表决心的意义，用1﹣2个理由或论据支撑你的观点； （2）实现新年决心的做法（至少两点）． 【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句； 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3．不必写标题． 【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当． 【考点】R5：读写任务作文．
【分析】高分句型
1． While fulfilled aspirations do bring happiness， many people fail to make their resolutions work．
句子While fulfilled aspirations do bring happiness是省略句，省略了 主语many people 和
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系动词are．
虽然实现的愿望确实带来了幸福，但许多人未能使他们的决心发挥作用．
2．At the same time， assess and reward ourselves in time for remarkable progress that we have made．
修饰名词remarkable progress ，关系词that 引导定语从句we have made． 同时，要及时评估和奖励我们取得的显著进步．
【解答】People tend to make resolutions on New Year's Day to inspire themselves to meet new goals． While fulfilled aspirations do bring happiness， many people fail to make their resolutions work．【高分句型一】（概括上面两段文字的主要内容）
Anyway， it makes sense to make New Year's resolutions when the calendar changes． At the beginning of a new year， resolutions can guarantee us a fresh start． Just as a saying goes， well begun is half done． Meanwhile， the resolutions can serve as a constant reminder and a powerful motivator towards our goals．（新年表决心的意义）
Therefore， practical methods should be adopted to make our resolutions come true． Break our resolutions into a series of time﹣based steps and achieve them one by one． Also， share our resolutions with our family members who can regularly remind us． At the same time， assess and reward ourselves in time for remarkable progress that we have made．【高分句型二】 I'm sure that we will make it with persistent efforts． （实现新年决心的做法） 【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾． 第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意\参考词汇\的提示作用）．
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