Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. And the bookstore next to our middle school is still there.

答案：第一句：第一个in→from; living→live 第二句：older→old; were→are

第三句：exist→exists; where→that/which 第四句：sports前加a; their→its 第五句：去掉been 第六句：And→But

一、基本结构

写建议信，大都使用口语化的语言。建议信一般包括以下几个部分： 1．地址、日期和称呼。

2．开头：可开门见山，直接说明写信的目的，并对对方对自己的信任简单表示感谢，或者表明自己的诚意。

一般先提一提来信里谈到的各项事情，答复对方的问题，然后再谈自己想要说的话。 3．正文：正文是建议信的主体。要写清给对方什么建议，并给出你的理解以及见解。 4．结尾：对提出的建议进行总结，表达希望建议得以采纳，问题得以解决的愿望，并表示祝愿。

5．签名与称呼一样，要视与写信人的关系而定。给朋友的信，一般直接写名字即可。 二、增分佳句

A．建议信开头常用句式

1．I'm glad to receive your letterasking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

我非常高兴收到你的来信，信中你问我如何学好汉语。

2．I am glad to knowthat you are going to enter college and it is my great pleasure to give you some suggestions of choosing your major.

我很高兴得知你将进入大学并且很荣幸能就专业选择给你一些建议。

3．Concerning your request, I would like to offer my advice on how to keep fit.

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对于你的请求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建议。 B．表达建议的常用句式

4．In the first place, Iwould recommenda balanced diet. 首先，我会推荐均衡饮食。

5．In my opinion, you would be wise to accept his advice. 依我之见，采纳他的建议是您的明智之举。

6．I find it necessary to take down notes while listening. 我发现有必要边听边记笔记。

7．Why not drink a little, exercise, stop smoking and eat more fruit and vegetables?

为何不少喝点酒、参加锻炼、戒烟、多吃水果和蔬菜呢？

8．If we had followedhis advice, we could have done the job better, with less money and fewer people.

要是听取了他的意见，我们不仅可以节省人力、物力，而且还会把工作做得更好。 C．建议信结尾常用句式

9．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.

我希望这些提议/建议/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。

[题目要求]

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Lisa将于2022年来中国张家口参加冬奥会，她来信向你咨询如何提高汉语水平，请你用英语给她写一封回信，提出建议并说明理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。 第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题

1．确定体裁：本文为建议信。

2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第二人称。 3．确定时态：时态应主要用一般现在时。 二、构思

第一段：写信事由(来参加冬奥会)＋写信目的(建议如何提高汉语水平)

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??建议二：听中文歌、看中文电影，开阔视野，更好地

第二段：? 理解中文

建议三：写信彼此联系，提高写作水平，另外写?? 日记

第三段：表示祝愿 第二步：核心词汇想周全

1．delighted 高兴的 2．as_for 至于，关于 3．broaden_horizons 开阔视野

4．gain_a_better_understanding_of 更好地理解 5．keep_in_touch_with 保持联系 6．benefit 有益于 7．keep_a_diary 写日记

8．make_great_progress 取得巨大进步 第三步：由词扩句雏形现

1．我非常高兴得知你将来中国参加2022年冬季奥运会。

建议一：多交朋友，提高口语水平

I'm_more_than_delighted_to_learn_that you will come to China for the 2022 Winter Olympic Games.

2．日常生活中多交中国朋友，你可以练习中文口语。

Make_more_Chinese_friends_in_your_daily_life and you can practice your spoken Chinese.

3．听中文歌曲和看中文电影也是很好的帮你开阔视野，更好地理解中文的方式。 Listening to Chinese songs and watching Chinese movies are also good ways to_help_you_broaden_your_horizons and gain_a_better_understanding_of_Chinese.

4．我们可以用中文写信彼此保持联系，这样对你的中文写作很有益。

We can keep_in_touch_with_each_other_by_writing_letters in Chinese, mainly benefiting_your_writing_level.

第四步：句式升级造亮点 1．用现在分词作状语改写句1

Learning_that_you_will_come_to_China_for_the_2022_Winter_Olympic_Games,_I'm_more_than_delighted.

2．用with whom引导的从句改写句2

Make_more_Chinese_friends_in_your_daily_life,_with_whom_you_can_practice_yo

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ur_spoken_Chinese.

3．用which引导定语从句改写句3

Listening_to_Chinese_songs_and_watching_Chinese_movies_are_also_good_ways,_which_can_help_you_broaden_your_horizons_and_gain_a_better_understanding_of_Chinese.

第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 Dear_Lisa，

Learning_that_you_will_come_to_China_for_the_2022_Winter_Olympic_Games,_I'm_more_than_delighted._As_for_how_to_improve_your_Chinese,_I'd_like_to_give_you_some_suggestions.

To_begin_with,_make_more_Chinese_friends_in_your_daily_life,_with_whom_you_can_practice_your_spoken_Chinese._What's_more,_listening_to_Chinese_songs_and_watching_Chinese_movies_are_also_good_ways,_which_can_help_you_broaden_your_horizons_and_gain_a_better_understanding_of_Chinese._Last_but_not_least,_we_can_keep_in_touch_with_each_other_by_writing_letters_in_Chinese,_mainly_benefiting_your_writing_level._Keeping_a_diary_is_also_a_great_choice.

I_hope_you_will_find_these_suggestions_beneficial_and_make_great_progress_in_Chinese.

Yours,_ Li_Hua

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