Friday. May 11th

Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.

The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!

I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future! (98 words)

Possible version 2: Friday, May 11th

Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.

As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.

I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again! （99 words）

体即可。

16.【2018年浙江省湖州市】假定你是李蕾，请你对美国朋友Amy的邮件进行回复。你可以根据邮件内容作适当发挥；邮件中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；词数：80-100；短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project 17

Hi there! How is it going? Haven’t heard from you for a long time. We are dong a project at school about how different teenagers in the world have fun. I’d really like you to help me if you can! So, can you tell me: ·what things you do to have a good time? ·why you think having fun is important? If you can think of anything else to write, please do! In return, I’ll send you some great pictures of me and my friends in California. Thanks very much, and write soon! Amy

From: amycali5000@aeim.cup Subject: school project Hi, Amy! Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven’t written sooner. Anyway, you want to know how we have fun here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Lei

【答案】Hi, Amy!

Thanks for your email. Sorry I haven't written sooner. You want to know how we have fun here in China, anyway, we teenagers have different ways to enjoy ourselves, like playing sports, playing video games, and watching movies or TV, etc.

As a basketball fan since childhood, the most interesting thing for me is playing basketball with my friends after a day's study in the classroom. We almost play every day, competing, talking and laughing, making it the most enjoyable and relaxing moment. Besides, I often watch basketball

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games on TV. A close game between two teams always make me excited and sometimes wild with joy. I think it's helpful for both the body and mind. Expecting your great pictures!

点睛：这封邮件使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be heard from；have fun enjoy ourselves；between ··· and；make me excited 和 both ··· and等；almost；Besides等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

17.【2018年浙江省衢州市】假设你是Li Hua，以下是你的美国笔友Alex发给你的一封电子邮件，谢你根据该邮件内容给Alex回一封邮件。

要求：①考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；②邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；③字数90—110。 【答案】 From To Li Hua Alex Subject Can’t wait to meet you!

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Thanks for your last letter, and I can’t tell you how excited I am now! I plan to fly to America on July 10 and stay there for about three weeks. I will take an English course to improve my spoken English. If possible, I hope to visit some American families to experience their life and learn more about American culture. Also I’d like to take trips to Hollywood and Disneyland. That must be really interesting. Of course I need to buy some presents for my family and friends. Do you have any suggestions? Can’t wait to meet you! Yours, Li Hua

【解析】写作分析：这篇写作的体裁是信件，需要写一封回信。写作之前需要正确阅读原来信件中的内容，才能明白需要完成什么样的写作任务。通过读信，发现Alex得知Li Hua要早七月来洛杉矶，他想知道Li Hua到达的时间、停留的时间以及想在美国做的事情。写作难度不大，但需要注意书信的格式以及使得文章结构完整。 写作亮点：

回信一开始需要表达对收到信件的感谢（Thanks for your last letter），表达自己对于旅途的期待，然后需要按照顺序描述自己的计划。增添的细节是“I will take an English course to improve my spoken English.”（我将要上一次英语课程来提高自己的口语。），在这个前提下，表达了自己希望在美国做的事情。对于自己想要去的地方也进行了陈述，但表述也不止于此，还提到了去玩之后还想买一些礼物，这样的做法使得全文连贯得体。最后再次表达了自己的迫切之情（Can’t wait to meet you!），总体来说文章语言连贯、结构完整。

18.【2018年浙江省温州市】.如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法,以 Weekend or Not?为题写一篇约110词的英语短文向 Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。

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