In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily. 【答案】Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.
First, I always obey the traffic rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic light is red, I won’t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it’s safe. Second, I often eat healthily and safely. It’s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating too much fast food will do harm to my body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especially friends who I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other. What’s more, I’d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it’s dangerous for us to swim alone, especially in deep lakes or river. So don’t do that.
In short, if we obey the rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
亮点说明:
1. 本文书写的内容完整、条理清楚。
2. 在文中使用了First,Second,Third等词汇,使文章层次分明。易于理解。
3. 作者所加的一条很好,防溺水,是当今安全隐患最大的。同时还运用了句型It’s dangerous for us to do sth. 使文章增色不少。因此本文为上等之作。
4.【2018年山东济宁地区中考】某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文,标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”,请你写一篇英文稿件,内容需包括以下要点: 1. Who was the person you made happy? 2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do? 4. Why did it make him/her happy? 5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意:1.词数:100左右(题目不计入总词数)。
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2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。
【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.
In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析:这是一篇给定标题的材料作文,需要逐条完成要点问题的回答,描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历,是一篇记叙文,首先要读懂5个问题,其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起,变成一篇短文,同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。 5.【2018年山东聊城地区中考】假如你要竞选你班的体育委员,请你用英语进行竞选演讲。演讲的主要内容包括:
1.自己喜欢体育,身体健康; 2.擅长球类运动,尤其是足球和篮球;
3.可以传授运动技艺,助大家比赛取得最佳成绩。 注意:
1.词数:80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.演讲内容中不得出现真实的学校和个人名字; 4.演讲的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I want to be the PE monitor. _________________________________________________
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【答案】I want to be the PE monitor. I enjoy sport, and I can run very fast. I’m really fit and healthy. Just watch me in the playground between lessons! I play most ball games well. But I’m really good at football, and I play basketball in the school team. Because I have a lot of good playing skills. I usually get the best score in every match. I can teach you some if you like. Choose me for the PE monitor and you can get the best score too!
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6.【2018年山东省青岛】现在,中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量,但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就 此现象写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。内容包括: 1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因; 2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响; 3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。
要求:1. 词数:80—100(开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 参考词汇:be short of 缺少
Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now 【答案】Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.They think doing exercise can affect their studies.Therefore they have less time to study.Doing sports is good for their health. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forced to take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities.In this way, students live in a healthy lifestyle, they won’t get sick easily.But after they leaving school, no one forces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.
I think students should take exercise every day outside the school.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.
7.【2018年山东省威海市】 “照镜子”是生活中的平常事,以生活为镜,可以照出现实中真实的自己。请以“Me in the mirror”为题,写一篇80词以上的英语短文。围绕自己最突出的一至两个优点和缺点, 重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我,成长为更好的自己。 要求:1.题目已给出,不计入总词数; 2.观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅; 3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】Me in the mirror
Looking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and I'm always ready to help them. So I'm very popular in my school. But I have a big problem, I'm less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.
When I go to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthier lifestyle. I'll spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. What's more, I will read more books and master good leaning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.
【高分句型一】
I'm less interested in my lessons and I can’ t concentrate in class. 我对功课不太感兴趣,上课也不能集中精力。be interested in短语的使用,使文章增色不少。 【高分句型二】
In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed. 业余时间,我花太多的时间在电脑游戏上,所以我没有取得好成绩,这使我的父母很失望。which make my parents disappointed. 是由which引导的定语从句。 【高分句型三】
I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. 我将集中精力在课堂上,认真完成我的学习任务。说明作者在后来认识到了错误,而努力学习。
8.【2018年陕西省中考】假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容,写一
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