谋篇分析 根据漫画不难发现，在足球场中一位球员等待射门，守门员等待接对方的射门。在射 门球员头脑中有一种想法，他认为守门员体态庞大，挡住了球门，自己射门举步唯艰；在守门员头脑中也有一种想法，他认为自己体态渺小，大部分球门裸露外，对方可以 轻易将球射进自家大门。漫画反映的是“缺乏自信导致失败”，即该文章的主题。 根据提纲中的信息1) describe the drawing,.本文开头需要一个独立的段落，即描述漫画 段。 根据提纲中的信息2) interpret its meaning本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评 论，即漫画所传递的深刻含义。 根据提纲中的信息3) support your view with examples.本篇文章结尾处要体现出作者对 该现象的评论，即引用具体实例阐述漫画表达的观点。 SAMPLE

How impressive the cartoon is in describing one of the most critical characteristic personalities concerning value and virtue! This cartoon depicts a picture of a football game with two players facing each other. One player is going to kick the ball while the goalkeeper is standing in front of a goal, ready to protect it. But both parties are losing their confidence. The striker magnifies the goalkeeper in his mind so that chances of shooting in are slim. Likewise, the goalkeeper minimizes his own image as if he couldn't defend the goal successfully.

Obviously, both of the players in the picture don't have enough confidence and if you have little confidence, how can you achieve your goal in life? The belief of what one can achieve and succeed often spells the difference between success and failure. On account of the fast pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals. The past few years have witnessed great increase in the difficulty of examinations and employment. Thus we must maintain powerful self-confidence and optimism in the face of challenges so as to survive and succeed.

Confidence can be shown in the performance of many people. Take Liuxiang as an example. It is because of his Self-confidence that he never shrinks in front of other experienced players and works wonders again and again. On the contrary, some athletes do well in everyday training, but when facing other people they fail to present the best of themselves for the lack of

self-confidence.

As the saying goes, confidence is the first step to success! Only by building strong self-confidence can we move closer to our dreams. 文章结构分析 第一段

How impressive the cartoon is in describing one of the most critical characteristic personalities concerning…… 用来引出漫画内容，并且给人以“心领神会”之感。 This cartoon depicts a picture of…… 描述漫画内容。 第二段

Obviously, ……and if……, how can you achieve your goal in life? 用来引出主题，并且顺利的强调主题的重要。

The belief of what one can achieve and succeed often spells the difference between success and failure. On account of the fast pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals. ……Thus we must maintain powerful …… in the face of challenges so as to survive and succeed. 用来联系现实，只有将主题与现实联系到一起才能体现出主题的意义和作用。 第三段

Confidence can be shown in the performance of many people. Take Liuxiang as an example. 举例子，符合提纲要求来展开文章。

It is because of...... On the contrary, …… 展开例子，联系到主题，再次强调主题的重要性。 第四段

As the saying goes,…… 谚语将文章主题升华。

Only by building strong self-confidence can we move closer to our dreams. 利用倒装句型下结论，并把文章顺利结尾。