2020年高考英语新题型写作技巧十 读后续写及续写综合训练 下载本文

16. are alarmed by 17. bumping into

18. I dragged myself out of bed 19. He paused for breath 20. without pausing for thought 21. extremely sorrowful 22.

fell on

23. looked on in silence 24. sprang to his feet 25. rolled down 26.

glowing in the dark

27. gazed up at him 28. sighed deeply(heavily) 29. took a firm grip of 30. on her knees 31. shot past me

32. threw an anxious glance 33. great satisfaction 34. with envy

35. A sudden wave of joy 36.

fell upon

37. shattered the silence 38.

got up the courage

39. was still conscious 40.

full of/filled with excitement

41. In his excitement 42. bent towards 43. whistled happily 44. slipped quietly out of 45. gently led her away

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二. 请用生动的词语和高级语法句式翻译下面的段落。

(一)

Jim 看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中, 他想到了那个姑娘。Jim 仍然喘着粗气, 朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘, 他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她, 他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了, 她安全了。姑娘许久没说话, 接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道:“是你吗, 爸爸?”

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(二)

第二天, Meg去跟Mrs.Gilson 解释了她为什么不交回家作业。为了不让同学知道这件事, 她趁没人注意时悄悄地溜进了Mrs. Gilson的办公室。Meg低着头, 她告诉了Mrs.Gilson她的回家作业找不到了。“我保证我完成了回家作业。。。。。。”她解释道, 眼里含着泪。见此情景, Mrs. Gilson 打断了她。她笑着告诉Meg她已经在上一天把她的作业和试卷一起交起来了。她知道Meg不会因为偷懒而说谎。听到Mrs.Gilson的话, Meg 如释重负。她开心地笑了, 眼里的泪水落了下来。

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【参考答案】

(一)

Seeing the attacker flee/disappear/run into the darkness, Jim thought of the girl. Still breathing heavily, Jim walked towards her. The girl was sitting behind the bushes, sobbing. Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly, he could sense her trembling alarm with certainty. To avoid frightening the girl further, Jim spoke to her at a distance. In a soft voice, Jim told her that the attacker had run away and that she was safe. There was a long silence and then in astonishment he heard the girl ask, “Dad, is that you?”

(二)

The next day, Meg went to tell Mrs. Gilson why she couldn’t hand in her homework. To avoid being known by her classmates, she secretly slid into Mrs. Gilson’s office without being noticed. Her head drooped, Meg told Mrs. Gilson the truth that she just could not find her homework. “I promise that I did finish my homework and…” she explained, tears flooding her eyes. Seeing this, Mrs. Gilson interrupted her. With a smile, she told Meg that she had handed in her homework with her paper the day before. She knew Meg was not lying because of laziness. Hearing this, Meg felt a surge of relief. She smiled brightly, drops of tears rolling down her cheeks.

故事续写综合训练

阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。

A

On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.

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Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.

Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).

Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.

At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:

The car abruptly stopped in front of him._______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:

A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________

B

I’m originally from Orange County, California, where I had the pleasure and honor of serving as a Newport Beach ocean lifeguard for five seasons. Whenever I could, I got shifts working the Point. If you wanted to save lives, that’s where you worked. The Point was known for its massive rip currents (激流).

So, late in a shift, I was working Tower 15. Two blocks to my right was another guard named Mike, working Tower 17. I’d known Mike for a number of years. Mike had a rough upbringing. You can tell just by looking at him.

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