六.My classmate xxx:I represent the whole class,we think you are a little bit depression during this period. If you have any problem, just tell us, we will help you, our class is like a big family, we would help each other freely. Don't be sad for the bad situation now, look for the future, do not fall behind of the school, focus on the school works, all the sadness will pass by the time passing, it all becomes to the past. 【解析】
本书面表达时要求学生以李磊的身份给吉姆写一封信,说说你是如何学习英语的,并且给出了一些关键词汇。首先,审题时,应适当地进行谋篇布局,然后,再用规范的语言,流畅的语句,详细叙述自己是如何写英语的。另外,还要注意使用一些固定的句式以提高文章的得分等级。
if you have 本文语句流畅,语言规范。如能适当使用一些比较高级的句型及习惯英语,那就会提高一个得分等级。如:any problem, just tell us, we will help you, our class is like a big family, we would help each other freely. don't be sad for the bad situation now这些给文章增色不少。