考研英语写作

三段论：第一段---描述图画或图表 第二段---解释寓意 第三段---给出评论

第一段：

第一句

1、As is shown above , 描述图画（倒装）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.报纸上有一张图画引起人们广泛的关注。 描述图画注意：

第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。 第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。 第三部; 寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。 模式： 在图画中央有------(倒装)，它-------（主谓一致、现在分词、非限定性定语从句），周围有-----（独立主格作状语）

第二句----总结

① The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but

only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。

② The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself , but to lead

us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真实目的

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不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐藏着什么。

第二段

第一句----观点的提出

(1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主题 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more obvious .

(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有害主题 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主题 is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在过去的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。（或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ） 万能观点：

① 图画主题的重要性

Nothing can be compared with···

···is not only necessary , but also indispensable ···

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···remains to be an integral part in···

② 图画主题的有害性

Nothing is more harmful or damaging. ···is not only harmful , but also damaging. ···in large measure detrimental.

第二句----进一步讲解人们的态度（重视/不重视） (1) The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主题 . (2) The public attach due attention to 重要主题 . give priority to···优先考虑··· attach attention to···对··注意

emphasize the importance of··· 强调···的重要性 stress the fundamental role of··· 强调···的根本作用 第三句---对主题进行展开 （3-4句）

By doing so , 十一个角度平行展开···（也可用科学论据法或举例法）

(一)、十一个万能理由（角度） 物质回报：

① 主题 can provide (offer) people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles. ② The industrious and insightful people will never fail to

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profits from (benefit from) doing 主题. 时间角度 节约时间

① It can make the most of one’s time , chance and

technology.

② 主题(e.g. Learning more western culture) , occupying

spare time so constructively , makes a person contented , with no time for boredom/wondering and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon. 浪费时间

As all known , the days of youth should not be friend/idled away and time should be cherished , but (主题 e.g. star worship) wastes hours , lavishes days and even squanders years , which leads us to say kills an even murders youngster’s prime time.

效率角度

① 主题（e .g. Star worship/Addiction to the Internet）makes people weary of other important things , discourages him to learn more , and finally lose their interest to learn , and lead to low grades / low efficiency / underachievement . ② One’s energy gradually wears off and one’s thought ,

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