4．描述学习方法用一般现在时，谈论过去的学习经历用一般过去时。 5．写作时谈论学习方法及别人使用第三人称，谈论自己时，使用第一人称。 6．语言流畅，不得出现真实人名、校名，词数80左右。 【范文点评】

①Good__learners__must__have__good__learning__methods.②Discussing__in__a__group__really__helps__me__have__a__better__understanding__of__what__I've__learned.It ③enriches__my__mind__and__allows__me__to__have__more__chances__to__express__my__thoughts. Shy and nervous，my classmate Jeff used to hide himself behind books.Answering questions in public was quite a difficult job for him.Once our math teacher ③asked__us__to__solve__a__difficult__problem.I encouraged__Jeff__to__discuss__his__idea__with__us and ④we__found__his__method__was__swrite down his answer on the blackboard and explain it to us.Believe it or not，he did it and we saw his great improvement after that. Discussing in a group ④not__only__makes__me__enjoy__the__happiness__of__being__a__good__learner__but__also__deepens__the__friendship__ between Jeff and me.Knowledge comes from communicating and questioning.⑤By__discussing，we__learn__more__wisely__and__better.

①引出话题，明确写作方向。 ②使用动名词短语和宾语从句，介绍到位、分析透彻。 ③enrich my mind，allow sb. to do sth.，express my thoughts，ask sb. to do sth.，encourage sb. to do sth.等固定短语和句型的使用，显示出作者深厚的语言功底和不凡的写作实力。 ④we found his method was so creative.主从复合文章表达更加严谨。 ⑤小结回扣，进一步点明论点，阐明看法，夹叙夹议，层层递进。 o__creative.Then we advised him to 句和not only…but also…连接的并列句的使用使