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With the growing popularity of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies.

Comparing with online games, many traditional games, like hide-and-seek, benefits kids mentally and physically. They were ever popular to several generations, which not only learned something valuable but also had fun playing the games. Therefore, the games are dying away now.

Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children's Internet time. Let children to know the harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. Help children judge healthy and unhealthy games. What's more, we should often organize events for children in which traditional games played. 【答案】

【小题1】把play online改成playing online 【小题2】把especial改成especially

【小题3】把Comparing with改成Compared with 【小题4】把benefits kids改成benefit kids 【小题5】把popular to改成popular with 【小题6】把which not改成who not 【小题7】把Therefore改成However 【小题8】把measure改成measures 【小题9】Let children to去掉to

【小题10】games played 改为games are played 【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题，从语法，词汇，短语等各个方面进行综合考查。

【小题1】考查be addicted to的用法。be addicted to：意为对..上瘾，其中to为介词，后面可接名词，动名词。此处play为动词，所以应用其动名词形式。故应把play online改成playing online

【小题2】考查副词用法。especial为形容词，不能用作插入成分，而especial their eyes应当为插入成分，而其副词形式可作插入成分。故应把especial改成especially 【小题3】考查分词作状语。Comparing with online games为分词作状语，分词的形式应与主语保持逻辑上的关系，其主语traditional games是物，作比较应该是人把traditional games和online games来进行比较，所以traditional games与compare构成被动关系，故用过去分词形式。故应把Comparing with改成Compared with 【小题4】考查谓语。many traditional games, like hide-and-seek，benefits kids mentally and physically这个句子中，虽然like后有一个名词，但是谓语动词依然与主语raditional games保持一致，不遵循谓语就近原则。故应把benefits kids改成benefit kids

【小题5】考查popular的用法。be popular with：受..的欢迎，固定搭配。popular不与to连用。故把popular to改成popular with

【小题6】考查定语从句。..several generations, which not only… playing the games这个句子中generations指代几代小孩子，而后面的句子作它的定语，先行词为人时，关系副词只能用who。故把which not改成who not

【小题7】考查副词。前面说传统游戏很受欢迎，而后面又说the games are dying away now.

传统游戏现在已经灭绝了，这在逻辑上不存在因果关系，而是转折关系，故用however而不用therefore。故把Therefore改成However

【小题8】考查名词。measure：可数名词，意为措施,其单复数形式的变化根据语境需要来变化。take measures to do：采取措施做..。故把measure改成measures 【小题9】考查let的用法。let:让，使，使役动词，其用法为let sb do：让某人做…。故把Let children to去掉to

【小题10】考查定语从句。events for children in which traditional games played中in which引导的从句作events的定语，从句中，缺少谓语动词，play与games构成被动关系，故需添加be动词are。故games played 改为games are played 考点：考查短文改错

21．下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was only 12 when we moved to California. I remember that I enjoyed flying non-stop across a whole country and that I wasn’t very happy about leave my friends. But Dad think it’d be good for we all to live in a suburb instead in the middle of a city. And Uncle Jeff, his brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us how wonderful California it was. He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job driving a taxi, that had been Dad’s job in New York. But we all agreed to try it for one year. Now we’ve been here for four years, and we all love it. 【答案】

【小题1】a改为the 【小题2】leave改为leaving 【小题3】think改为thought 【小题4】we改为us 【小题5】instead后加of 【小题6】were改为was 【小题7】去掉it

【小题8】easily改为easy 【小题9】that改为which 【小题10】But改为So/And 【解析】

【小题1】a改为the；考查定冠词和不定冠词；第二句across the whole country穿过整个国家中，the 特指whole country整个国家，定冠词也可特指上文提及的事物，而a表示泛指。故a改为the

【小题2】leave改为leaving；考查现在分词用法；第二句I wasn’t very happy about leaving my friends；离开我的朋友们我不开心。动名词作介词宾语介词about后接动词的现在分词形式，about doing sth.故leave改为leaving

【小题3】think改为thought；考查过去分词用法；第三句But Dad think…但是我爸爸认为……全文叙述使用一般过去时，故think改为thought

【小题4】we改为us；考查代词作介词宾语用法；第三句 be good for us all to live in…中，be good for do sth.里的sb.须为人称代词的宾格形式。代词作介词宾语，若是人称代词用作介词宾语，要注意用宾格。故we改为us.

【小题5】instead后加of；考查动词连接搭配；第三句中instead of in the middle of a city， instead意为“代替”“替代”，作副词用，通常位于句尾。如位于句首时常用逗号与后面阁开instead of是介宾短语，其意与instead相同，不同之处在于它后面常接宾语，且宾语多由名词、代词、介词、短语、动词 + ing 形式充当。故instead后加of

【小题6】were改为was；考查be动词用法；第四句And Uncle Jeff, his brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us…叔叔Jeff，爸爸的兄弟，在加利福尼亚差不多生活了20年，一直告诉我们……中his brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 year是插入语，作为Uncle Jeff的补充说明。Uncle Jeff后be动词为is的过去分词形式was，故were改为was 【小题7】去掉it；考查代词的用法；第四句中telling us how wonderful California was告诉我们加州是怎样的美好，这里由that引导的宾语从句，其中that被省略掉，宾语从句语序为v.+主语+谓语。而how wonderful California it was这是多么美好的加利福尼亚，单独来看这是一个完整的感叹句，与宾语从句结构不符。故去掉it 【小题8】easily改为easy；考查形容词用法；第五句中it would be easy for Dad to get a job driving a taxi对爸爸来说得到一个开出租车的工作很容易。It+be动词+adj.+for+sb.+to do sth.对某人来说做某事怎么样。这里be动词后须填形容词。故easily改为easy

【小题9】that改为which；考查非限制性定语从句；关系代词which在非限制性定语从句中所指代和修饰的可以是主句中的名词、形容词、短语、其他从句或整个主句，在从句中作主语、动词宾语、介词宾语或表语。第五句which had been Dad’s job in New York，这里的which指代前半段句子He said it would be easy for Dad to get a job driving a taxi。故that改为which

【小题10】But改为So/And；考查连词的用法；第六句So/And we all agreed to try it for one year而且我们同意用一年（的时间）去试试。文意表示家人愿意听取Uncle Jeff的建议，So/And表顺承，But表转折。故But改为So/And 考点：考查各种词性的用法

22．下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。