1995年同等学力外国语水平考试真题及答案 下载本文

(D)错应改成 being challenged

做此题的关键是要掌握动词enjoy只能接动名词,不能接不定式作宾语。从语义上看,句子表达的是“她喜欢受到挑战”,所以要用被动式。

只能接动名词作宾语的动词还有:acknowledge, admit, appreciate, avoid, consider, delay, deny, excuse, fancy, favour, finish, keep, mind, miss, postpone, practise, resist, stand, escape。

Part II Translation 参考译文:

In our times, anyone who wants to play as important a role as he expects must receive necessary education. With the advancement of science and technology,increasingly more courses are offered nowadays even in primary schools and high schools. Modern education, compared with education in the past, places more emphasis on its practicality.

解析:

“任何人想?必须接受必要的教育”一句可处理成主从复合句,“想要在社会上起到所希望起的作用”在原文是条件句,表示假设条件,英译时,可根据句意和英文表达习惯,将此句译成定语从句:anyone who wants to ?must receive necessary education,而定语从句当中又包含一个比较状语成分 as important a role as he expects。“随着科技的进步”在句中是伴随状语,可译为with the advancement of science and technology;除advancement(意为:进步、发展、进展)外,此处还可选用 progress 或development等词。“中小学”在英文里可译为 primary school (或 elementary school) and high school。“越来越多”,除了可译成大家熟知的短语more and more之外,另一译法是increasingly more。“课程”指courses,注意不要与lessons混淆,前者指学校教学开设的科目、课型,如: What courses are you taking this semester?“你这学期选什么课了?”而后者在这里则指具体的一堂或几堂课,如:Afternoon lessons begin at 2 o'clock.“下午的课2点开始。”“开设”可译为 open 、offer 。“与过去的教育相比”译为分词短语compared with education in the past,“过去的”还可译为 conventional,表示“旧的,传统的”,如 a conventional design of carpet,意为“老式的地毯设计”;“实用方面”可直译为 its practical aspect或 pracaticality。

Part III Guided Writing Sample 1 (14 Points)

Since May 1 1995,a five-day week has been put into practice in China, which has received a warm welcome from the majority of people because it has brought about many advantages to the society , families as well as individuals.

With people doing the same amount of work in less time , a five-day week can improve the working efficiency which, in the long run, will better the quality of people's life. Furthermore, the application of a five-day week may also provide more opportunities for employment. A two-day weekend can promote the development of service indutries such as commerce, tourism and so on. Therefore, it will be benifial to the stability and advancement of our society.

Besides,a shorter work week and a longer weekend can enable family members to have enough time being together ,either outdoors or indoors, rendering chances for a better understanding between couples or different generations.

Moreover, as for individuals ,they can make full use of a five-day week and a two-day holiday. As a saying goes:No rest, no work. From a two-day adequate rest, most can work more

diligently and efficiently. In a word, a five-day week meets the need of a rapid rythem of modern life and will contribute a lot to the social advancement.

评语:

内容切题,即五天工作制的好处。文章层次清楚,逻辑性强。文字连贯,句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。第三段与第四段分别使用过渡词Besides, Moreover,使上下文十分连贯,突出了五天工作制的几方面的好处。

Sample 2 (11 points)

A five-day week started to be carried out on May 1 1995 in our country. It has brought about many advantages since then.

First , families can get benifits from it. On weekends parents can take their children to park, musiums.Children will be able to learn much usefull knowledge. Besides, housewives have enough time to do housework ,shopping and relax themselves.

Second, it can encourage individuals to do their best to finish their work during five days. After two days rest, each will be in high spirit.

At the same time, the society is benifited . The social property increase with the increasing of peoples'creation.So the rate of social productivity will be improved.

So the rule of a five-day week is necessary for the society, families and individuals. We should put it into full use and work hard in five week days and enjoy ourselves on weekends.

评语:

内容切题。表达基本清楚,文字基本连贯,句式有一定变化。用词基本正确。有一句有明显错误:relax应改为relaxing。还有park应加s,increase应为第三人称单数。creation意为创造,此处应为creativity创造力。

Sample 3 (8 points)

As we all know, we have a five-day week since May 1 1995.Everyone wonders it brings us. We carry out the new rule of five-day week is suitable for the situation of our society . One has finish his work in five day instead of six days. It can increease the efficiency.People go to the markets,the parks and some other places , in the two days. It makes economy to thrive. The whole family can stay together for two days. They think of many way to have good time . A five day week brings a great joy to family.

Everyone benifits from a five day week . You have more time that be controlled by youself . You can use the two-free-day to do what you want . You can go out for a shorter trip. In words if you can make advantages of it ,you will learn a lot . We should make our society more brighter and beautiful.

评语:

内容基本切题,全文围绕实施五天工作制的好处来写。表达基本清楚,但语言错误较多,有些属于严重错误,如第二段第一句中有两个谓语动词carry out,is;本段第二句has finish应改为finishes,删去has ;本段最后一句thrive前删去to,make后跟不带to的不定式。另外,由于用词面比较窄,一些句子表达得不够清楚。make advantages of 是错误搭配,应为take advantage of意为利用。

Sample 4 (5 points)

Nowaday people has five days for work.It take into action widly in the country,great advantages have come into views.

The five-day week benefit sociaty. first it can made work more effective . Second ,it can provi more to people.It let people more time . In this way it can producing more.

As for family , the five day week let familyhave more time to enjoy together.By and lage, the five day week is benifitful to person , family and sociel.

评语:

内容基本切题,意思尚可理解,但结构、用词、单复数等语言错误很多,字数不够。

Sample 5 (2 points)

A five day syten carryedout May 1 1995.That people only need work five day other no work . It took adantag.

Why that? Frst it light works , freed two day, a good mood. Work an entrtan are two side .Only when the two side people out heats.