大小写是否拼写正确(这点同学们很容易忽视).如果某一行有两种改错方式要推敲哪一种是最佳改法.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
【分析】本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息要求给Peter回信,介绍一下你校学生体育运动情况.写作时仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目.写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态,人称使用第一人称.还要注意使用固定短语,高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点. 高分句型一:
To begin with,a fabulous new stadium has been built up,which has become the new landmark in our school.
首先,一座非凡的新体育馆已经被建成,它已经成为我们学校的地标.
这句话使用主从复合句,a fabulous new stadium has been built up是主句,which引导非限制性定语从句.
Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which Pingpong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.
还有,随着体育馆的建成,各种各样的体育活动也能够举行,其中有乒乓球,足球还有跑步比赛很受欢迎.
这句话使用with复合结构,主句是a wide range of sports events are able to be held,of which引导非限制性定语从句. 【解答】Dear peter
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch. To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school.(介绍体育场馆) (高分句型一)Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which Pingpong, football as well as running
competitions enjoy great popularity.(主要运动项目)(高分句型二) As for me, I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront
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the challenges in my life.(你喜欢的项目)All in all, i sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself. Yours Li hua
【点评】考查提纲类书面表达:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
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