2019年上海市奉贤区高考英语一模试卷 下载本文

进行时;3. look forward to意为\展望,期待(后接动词的ing形式)\.

【点评】考查汉译英,注意英汉之间的差异,英语与汉语之间的一些特殊表达,准确地理解句子、翻译句子,然后根据句意及提示完成句子,使句意更通顺. VI. Guided Writing

13.(25分)Directions: Write an English composition in 120﹣150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

在你看过的电影、电视或书中,肯定有许多场景历历在目,请你描述令你印象深刻的一个场景,并谈谈为什么.你的文章必须包括: ●描述你印象深刻的一个场景; ●说明你对此印象深刻的理由. 【考点】R1:提纲类.

【分析】高分句型一:The most impressive scene I have seen is in the movie Titanic, where Jack sacrificed for Rose and gave the chance of survival to his lover.

译文:我看过的最令人印象深刻的一幕是在电影《泰坦尼克号》中,杰克牺牲了罗斯,给了他的爱人生存的机会.

分析:这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句.

高分句型二:Seldom will the give love to people surrounding us, which is selfish. 译文:很少有人会爱我们周围的人,这是自私的. 分析:这句话使用倒装句和which引导非限制性定语从句.

【解答】The most impressive scene I have seen is in the movie Titanic, where Jack sacrificed for Rose and gave the chance of survival to his lover. 【高分句型一】I was moved to tears at the scene. (描述你印象深刻的一个场景)

In our life, we are loved by families and friends, which supports us through the hard time. However, some of us just want to get love from others. Seldom will the give love to people surrounding us, which is selfish. 【高分句型二】In my opinion, at some point of life, we should also sacrifice our benefit for others, thus enabing our life more meaningful.(说明你对此印象深刻的理由)

【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符

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合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

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