2. Are words or sentences copied or your own words? （是否是自己的话） 3. Are transitional words used to make writing coherent? （是否使用了衔接词） 4. Are all the sentences, spelling, and punctuation marks correct? （是否有语法，拼写错误） 【记叙文】 Everyday Heroes: The Preteen Translator On a cold afternoon in January 2015, Yesenia Diosdado, 11, got off a school bus in Lenexa, Kansas, near the apartment building where she lives with her family. When the bus pulled away, Yesenia saw police and emergency workers looking after victims of a three-car accident that had occurred at a busy intersection nearby. Yesenia joined a small crowed of onlookers across the street. She worried using sign language, but he couldn’t understand her. ‘I heard him ask for an interpreter,’ Yesenia says. She ran over to the nurse to help—her mother, a former sign language interpreter, had taught her and her sisters how to sign ( no one in the family is hearing weakened). ‘She said, “I sign. Can I help”’ says EMA captain Chris Winger. ‘I was knocked down.’ Yesenia was able to replay to the emergency personnel that the woman’s neck was injured and tell them the name of the local hospital she preferred. ‘She looked really hurt,’ says Yesenia. ‘I’m proud that I got to do something to help.’ When her mother, Susan Milidore, 36, heard about Yesenia’s heroics, she wasn’t surprised. ‘It’s in her nature to help,’ says Susan. ‘I was impressed that she recognized the seriousness of the situation and took charge. Most adults wouldn’t have done that.’ A few weeks later, paramedics presented Yesenia with a gold coin and a certificate of appreciation at her elementary school. ‘My mom always says that you never know when sign language might come in handy,’ says Yesenia. ‘That day, it did.’ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ （60）_______ ________ Key: A possible version: Yesenia Diosdado, a 11-year-old girl, helped police and emergency workers send a woman injured in a car accident to the hospital in January 2015. She managed to read the woman’s sign language taught by her mother, who has proud of her heroics. Later, she was awarded a gold coin and a certificate of appreciation. 【议论文】 If You’ve ever sent an email that started with the words\bad news for you: It probably backfired. Not only are 'friendly reminder\but everyone also secretly hates them. To you, a reminder email could simply be 'a friendly way to ask for something that's late,%unfortunately, that might not be the message coming across to your coworkers. You need to quit this bad email habit and stop sending them immediately. And here's why. For one, if you use \your coworkers. Although you might insert those phrases for a softer tone, they also make you sound insecure and unconfident. Be clear with your choice of words, choosing the straightforward\employees will appreciate the directness. But that's not even the worst part. It's also easy for those reminder emails to get lost in people's inboxes, if not ignored immediately. With countless emails flooding in per day, yours could easily get lost in the shuffle. Very likely, your coworkers will hit the\ Still, you need to get their attention somehow, right? After all, you have a job to do : Once you send the classic reminder email, try scheduling a meeting with the person via calendar invite. Even resending the original email with a red \-and still save face with your coworkers. (七宝中学2017十月月考) ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ （60）_______ ________ Key: A possible version: Sending reminder emails ,which may irritate the receiver ,is a bad habit to quit as “hedge words” in them reduce your credibility,and they are often lost in other emails. Making an appointment or using a “urgent ” flag in your email are advised if a reminder mail is necessary. 【说明文】 It's not piano lessons or dance classes. Nowadays, the biggest extra-curricular activity is going to a tutor. \about 800 Canadian dollars a month on tutors. It's costly,\out half my daughter's class had tutors, I felt like my child was going to fall behind because everyone else seemed to be ahead\ Shelley, a mother of three, also has tutors constantly coming in and out of her home. \my children, it was hard to get them focused. I was always yelling. When I got a tutor once a week, they became focused for one entire hour and could get most of their homework done.\ Tutoring isn't simply a private school phenomenon. Nor is it geared only toward lower-achieving students. In Canada alone, seven percent of high school students reported using a tutor in 2010. That increased to 15 percent last year. Overall, parents hire tutors because they are worried schools are not meeting their expectations, but there is also a cultural shift. A special value is placed on education in Asia, where tutoring is viewed as an extension of the school day. As a large number of Asians emigrated to the West over the recent years, their attitudes towards education have had an impact. Another reason for the growth in business is parental frustration and their packed schedules. \don’t have time to help their children with homework,\\ There has been a shift in the attitudes, too. \欺侮) for having a tutor,\\ Children don't seem to mind that they have a tutor. One parent feels surprised that so many of her child’s classmates have tutors. \now thinking of getting a tutor. Why? Her daughter has actually asked for one. （2017高三上八校联考） ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ _______ _______ ________ _______ ________ （60）_______ ________ Key: A possible version: (1)Tutoring is gaining popularity in Canada, suited to children (2) at different levels. Generally, (3) higher academic achievements are the goal, beyond which are the cultural and attitudinal shifts, partly due to (4) Asian immigrants' influence, and (5) parents' lack of time or ability to help children. These all contribute to the rise of the business and (6)the growing acceptance among parents and children. (60 words) 综合练习 【语法填空】*2 （1） Have you ever seen an old movie called Three Coins in the Fountain? It is about three young American women (21) _______(search) for permanent romance in Rome and they all find it. Far-fetched Hollywood? Well, from the world history point of view, romance did, in fact, set down its roots in Rome. The word romance evolved in Latin from Roma to Romanicus of the Roman language, to the Old French romanz escrive, (22) _______ means “to write in a Romance language,” and on to the English romance. The Romance languages (23) ____________(compose) of seven groups of languages that all have Latin (24) ______ their basis. These languages include French, Italian, Spanish and Portuguese. The common people in ancient Rome spoke (25)________ is referred to as Vulgar Latin, an informal speech, as opposed to the classical Latin of the more educated. Most language experts agree that Vulgar Latin is the chief source of the Romance languages. Medieval Romances were tales (26) __________(write) primary in French verse about brave heroes. The notion of having a romance with another person is thought (27) __________(develop) sometime during the Middle Ages. In the late 18th century and on through the 19th, a romance was not a love story (28) _________ a work of prose fiction that contained far-fetched, mysterious events. Romances of this period (29) _________(include) English Gothic novels like The Castle of Otranto by Horace Walpole. What exactly is a twentieth-century romance ? Does it have any relationship with the lively, popular novels written today, with their fantastic plots of love affairs? Or did the playwright Oscar Wilde have it right in The Picture of Dorian Gray: “ When one is in love, one always begins by deceiving (30) _________, and one always ends by deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.” (2017八校联考) Keys: 21. searching 22. which 23. are composed 24. as 25 .what 26. written 27. to have developed 28. but 29. included 30. oneself /himself （2） From classics to movies He can recite Shakespeare’s Hamlet from memory. His favorite ancient myth is The Odyssey. Tom Hiddleston, 32, could have been a popular professor teaching English Literature at (21) __________ university, but the well-educated British man chose to do something that he loves even more: acting. He’s well-known around the world as the villain Loki from the Hollywood films Thor (2011), The Avengers (2012) and now Thor: The Dark World, which will come out in China on Nov 8. Hiddleston’s role as Thor’s evil brother has led his fans — “Hiddlestoners” — (22) __________ (refer) to him as “the most charming villain” in cinema. (23) __________ his charm, Hiddleston had a tough time (24) __________ (persuade) his scientist father that acting was a worthwhile job. As a student at Eton, a private school for upper-class kids in England, Hiddleston performed in a lot of school plays. At 18, he appeared on stage at the Edinburgh International Festival. “It was the first time that people I knew and loved and respected came up to me after the show and said: ‘You could really do this (25) __________ you wanted to’,” Hiddleston told the Daily Mail. He said that as a teenager he didn’t have much self-esteem, but acting gave him confidence. “It was when they started saying I could do it (26) __________ I really committed to it as a possibility,” he continued. However, his father did not approve, believing his polite and bright son should be using his brains for (27) __________ else. “You’ve been educated, so why do you want to spend your life pretending to be someone else when you could be your own man?” the father told the son. So, instead of going to drama school, Hiddleston went to Cambridge, (28) __________ he studied classics. There, he continued to appear in student plays and even landed some roles on TV and in local theaters. He managed to balance his acting and his studies so well that he (29) __________ (graduate) with a first-class degree.