2011年6月六级预测作文--低碳生活
>>低碳生活
1.近年来低碳生活逐渐成为热议话题 2.推行低碳生活的措施 3.我认为…… >>范文背诵
Low-Carbon Life
Every one of us is responsible for the greenhouse gases emitted in our daily activities. Therefore, the notion of low-carbon life has come into existence and become popular all over the world.
Leading a low-carbon life needs everyone's consciousness and daily efforts. Firstly, we should get started by calculating our own carbon footprint, which means that attention should be paid to details, such as what sort of apartment we live in, our personal use of energy and travel habits. Secondly, we should carry out low-carbon concept in every aspect of daily life. For example, we should use muscle power rather than gasoline when we can, skip the bottled water, and choose foods thoughtfully. Last but not least, new low-carbon technology should be adopted to help establish the low-carbon life style.
As far as I am concerned, it is meaningful to call on people to start a low-carbon life as soon as possible. This new life style will not only contribute to the environment protection but also bring us a much healthier body.
>>亮点词汇 ①emit v.发散，释放 ②come into existence出现 ③calculate v.计算，测量 ④carbon footprint 碳足迹（指一个人、企业或团体的“碳耗用量”） ⑤carry out践行，实施 ⑥thoughtfully ad.仔细考虑地 ⑦skip v.跳过，弃用 ⑧bottled water 瓶装水 ⑨establish v.建立 >>文章点评
第一段指出随着环保意识的提高，应对气候变化和推行低碳生活已经成为近年来世界范围内热议的话题。
第二段从三个方面阐述了推行低碳生活的一些相关措施。首先，测量自己的碳足迹，以清楚地知道自己的碳排放量；其次，从生活中的小事做起，减少碳排放，降低能源消耗；最后，积极推广低碳技术在日常生活中的应用。第二句使用which引导的非限制性定语从句，对前面的主句内容做进一步的解释说明；从句中又套用了that引导的宾语从句，并用such as导出一系列的例子。
第三段提出自己的观点。推广低碳生活方式意义深远，它不仅带给我们健康的环境，还能让我们拥有更加健康的身体。末句使用not only...but also...句型，连接两个谓语动词短语，是一个有用的高分结构。
2011年6月四级预测作文--学生攀比现象
>>大学生攀比现象
1.大学校园生活存在高消费、攀比现象 2.这种现象存在的原因 3.我该怎么做 >>范文背诵
Life Comparison among College Students
On today's consuming market, college students have attracted increasing attention as a particular group of consumers. They purchase famous brand clothes, superior cosmetics, mobile phones, laptop computers and other digital products to be fashionable. The urge to keep up with the Joneses is a phenomenon that can be found
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almost in every university.
This phenomenon results from several factors. First, plenty of families baby their son or daughter too much. Each parent would like their children to live a happy and comfortable campus life. Therefore, parents satisfactorily meet their children's economic needs. Second, college students are concerned about being face-saving. They would show off their richness in order to improve their image and form self-esteem.
As far as I am concerned, college students should be fully aware of the negative effect of the comparison phenomenon and try to build up scientific and rational consumption.
>>亮点词汇 ①superior a.上好的, 出众的 ②laptop computer笔记本电脑 ③keep up with the Joneses攀比现象 ④baby v.把……像婴儿一样对待; 对……娇生惯养 ⑤face-saving a.保全体面的, 顾全面子的 ⑥show off炫耀, 卖弄 ⑦self-esteem n.自尊, 自尊心 >>文章点评
文章就大学生生活攀比现象进行了剖析，并表明了自己的意见。第一段介绍校园中存在的攀比现象。如今消费市场中，大学生作为一个特殊的消费群体正越来越受到人们的关注。 为了追逐潮流，他们购买名牌服装、高档化妆品、手机、电脑等商品，使得许多大学生形成攀比心理。
第二段分析了攀比现象形成的原因。其一是父母对子女的溺爱；其二是大学生爱面子，期望通过富裕的物质生活充实美化自己的形象，以求得到自尊的满足。
最后一段说明大学生要充分认识到攀比消费的负面影响，树立科学理性的消费观。
2011年6月六级预测作文--校园占座现象
>>大学校园占座现象
1.大学里“占座”现象十分普遍 2.分析这种现象带来的影响 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
Reserving a Seat
Nowadays, it is common to see a textbook, a notebook or even a piece of paper on the desk in the classroom or library, indicating that the seat has been taken. And strangely enough, most students seem to take this for granted.
Although for most students, reserving seats is for the sake of study, it still has brought some negative effects. On the one hand, reserving seats violates the rule of fairness. Some students cannot find a seat, even if they come to the classroom early. As a result, they tend to feel disappointed at college study. On the other hand, reserving seats is a selfish behavior. With a reserved seat, no matter how late one comes to class, the seat is still kept him. Therefore, students who are used to reserving seats may become insensitive, never concerning about others feelings.
Considering what has been mentioned above, I think it is high time that we college students reconsidered our behavior. As long as all of us improve our consciousness, it will not be difficult to get rid of the habit of reserving seats.
>>亮点词汇 ①indicate v.表明
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②take...for granted认为??是理所当然的 ③for the sake of 为了 ④violate v.违反，破坏
⑤disappointed a.失望的,沮丧的 ⑥be used to习惯于做某事
⑦insensitive a.置之不理的，麻木不仁的 ⑧concern about 关心
⑨reconsider v.重新考虑，三思 ⑩get rid of去除 >>文章点评
第一段提出当前大学校园中普遍存在的“占座”现象，而且大部分学生已经对此习以为常。首句使用动词的现在分词短语作伴随状语，使文章开篇就能展现作者的语言运用能力。
第二段从两个方面分析“占座”现象带来的影响。一方面，虽然“占座”是为了学习，但这却违背了公平原则，挫伤了许多学生的学习积极性；另一方面，“占座”行为也助长了部分学生的自私和麻木心理，不顾及他人的感受。末句中使用了who 引导的定语从句，并用现在分词短语作伴随状语，也是一个亮点句子结构。
第三段提出自己的看法：大学生应该重新审视“占座”的习惯，提高意识，摒弃这种不合理的行为。首句使用considering引导的现在分词短语作伴随状语，并且使用了it is high time that...这一高分句型。
2011年6月四级预测作文-- 校园安全事件
>>校园安全事件
1.近来多发校园安全事件
2.学校及社会采取多种措施，防止此类事件发生 3.我的看法 >>范文背诵
School Security
Recently, it has been reported that a series of attacks on children happened across China. In these bloody attacks，many children were stabbed to death or seriously injured, which caused public concern of the society.
It is urgent to take efficient measures to ensure security around the primary schools and kindergartens. Firstly, many schools have tightened their safety. They set up their own school security teams, which are equipped with necessary weapons. Secondly, security guards and political officers station at school gate and patrol around before and after school hours. Last but not least, each visitor will be checked and registered at the school gate.
In my opinion, these measures are not enough to settle down the problem. The deep-rooted cause can be traced back to social problems. We need to handle social problems and settle disputes. Only in this way can the hidden dangers be removed.
>>亮点词汇
①a series of一连串的 ②stab v.刺,中伤,刺穿 ③station v.驻扎, 部署 ④patrol v.出巡, 巡逻
⑤deep rooted a.根深蒂固的 ⑥trace back to追溯到 ⑦hidden dangers隐患 >>文章点评
文章第一段说明近来多发校园安全事件，许多孩子在事件中伤亡，引起了全社会对此问题的关注。
第二段阐述为加强校园安全所采取的措施：设立学校安保队，配备必要的武器；保安和行政官员在上学、放学高峰期执行执勤和巡逻任务；对学校的每一位访客都要进行检查和登记。
第三段表达自己对此问题的看法。要从根本上解决此问题应当处理好社会问题、解决争端，从而解除引起校园安全的隐患。
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2011年6月六级预测作文--如何保护知识产权
>>如何保护知识产权
1.知识产权保护越来越被重视 2.如何保护知识产权 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
How to Protect Intellectual Property
Along with the advance of the society, more and more technologies and innovations are put forward by scientists and other people, thus we attach much importance to protecting these immaterial things by resorting to intellectual property rights. Although these things are intangible, they are as crucial as the tangible assets we possess. Recently there appear a lot of cases which violate the intellectual property rights and affect the interests of people concerned. How should we deal with this problem?
To begin with, measures should be taken to arouse public awareness so that the majority may acquire a comprehensive understanding of this special property. Next, individuals and organizations who enjoy the property must equip themselves with adequate knowledge of related laws and regulations. Once violated, it's of great importance for them to refer to the useful tools. Last but not least, it's the governments’ responsibility to perfect the system of safe guarding.
As I see it, intellectual property represents the progress of society, so we should exert ourselves to protect it. And the issue of being violated will be solved ultimately if the above measures can be put into practice.
>>亮点词汇
①advance n.进步，前进 ②innovation n.革新，创新
③attach importance to认为??很重要 ④immaterial a.非实物的，无形的 ⑤intangible a.无形的 ⑥resort to求助于
⑦crucial a.关键的，重要的
⑧comprehensive a.全面的，综合性的
⑨equip...with使有准备，使能够（做某事） ⑩refer...to参考，查阅 11.exert oneself尽力，努力 12.ultimately ad.最后，最终 >>文章点评
第一段指出知识产权越来越被重视。首句中使用thus结构，表示因果关系，使句子结构清晰。
第二段从三个方面阐述如何保护知识产权。首先，要唤起公众的产权保护意识；其次，拥有知识产权的个人或组织要熟悉相关的法律法规，以防权利被侵犯；最后，政府应尽到完善知识产权保护体系的责任。
第三段表明自己的观点，即我们要尽可能保护知识产权，将以上举措付诸实施。
2011年6月四级预测作文--海外留学的利弊
>>海外留学的利弊 1.海外留学的好处
2.海外留学也存在一些问题 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
Overseas Study
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The discussion about overseas study has never stopped in the past few years. Let's have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion.
The biggest advantage of studying overseas is the higher academic level and advanced research facilities. What's more, by understanding a new culture and meeting different people, students can develop a more reasonable and balanced view towards the world. Last but not least, the experience will be invaluable to character building, which makes most students more independent, diligent and enterprising.
However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with, if a person does not make full preparations before going abroad, he will have great difficulty adapting to the new environment. In the second place, the cultural differences will hinder the regular life in many ways. Finally, money is always a big problem. Many students have to find part-time jobs to earn money to pay tuition and fees.
In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh disadvantages. Once they return home, the overseas students will make great contributions to our motherland.
>>亮点词汇
①research facilities研究设施
②reasonable and balanced合理平衡的 ③enterprising a.进取精神的
④have difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难 ⑤hinder v.阻碍，妨碍
⑥make contributions to our motherland为祖国作出贡献 >>文章点评
文章首段指出留学有利有弊。
第二段中阐述的好处包括国外的学术水平更高，研究设施更先进，能培养更加合理的世界观，还能塑造良好的性格。末句使用which 引导的非限制性定语从句，增加句式多样性。
第三段则指出，如果没做好准备就出国会遇到很多困难，而且文化差异和费用都是问题。 末段下结论，即利大于弊。
2011年6月六级预测作文--参考书与学习
>>参考书与学习
1.各种参考书给学生的学习提供了一定的帮助 2.过分依赖参考书的弊端 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
How to Take Advantage of Reference Books
Nowadays, various kinds of reference books for college students have come into existence. And many students gain so much that they soon find themselves totally relying on these books.
It should be admitted that reference books have brought great convenience to students. And conversely, over-reliance on these books has also caused negative effects. Firstly, students who have got reference books are more likely to believe all the contents in the books and neglect teachers instructions. Secondly, with reference books, many students tend to be absent from class and become lazy to think about how to solve problems on their own. Last but not least, there are so many different kinds of reference books that a great number of low quality ones are also among them, which will lead to students confusion.
As a college student, I agree that reference books are of great use in our pursuit of knowledge. However, it
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is not sensible to rely on them too much. After all, reference books will never replace what we are able to obtain from teachers and classes.
>>亮点词汇
①come into existence 出现 ②rely on 依赖，依靠 ③conversely ad. 相反地 ④over-reliance n. 过度依赖 ⑤be absent from class 逃课 ⑥confusion n. 混淆，困惑 ⑦replace v. 替代 >>文章点评
第一段提出各种参考书的出现的确给大学生带来一些学习上的帮助。末句使用so...that...句型，并且在that从句中套用了find oneself doing sth.的句子结构，是一个亮点句。
第二段从三个方面阐述大学生过分依赖参考书的弊端。首先，过分相信参考书的内容会忽略老师课上的讲授；其次，部分学生开始出现逃课的倾向；最后，参考书种类繁多，鱼龙混杂，一些低质量的版本会造成学生的误解。末句使用there be结构，并在其中使用了so...that...句型以及which引导的非限制性定语从句，增加了句子的层次。
第三段提出自己的观点，大学生应该理智地对待和使用参考书。第一句使用了be of + n.的结构，表达的是形容词的意义。例如: This is a book of great value to us.(这本书对于我们很有价值。)
2011年6月四级预测作文--学术造假
>>学术造假现象
1.近年来学术造假现象越来越普遍 2.学术造假现象造成的影响 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
On Academic Honesty
In recent years, the problem of academic fraud has become increasingly serious on university campuses and more and more people voice growing concern over it.
Such a phenomenon has brought many unfavorable consequences. To begin with, there is no doubt that it has blocked the country's scientific development. Second, the confession of some reputable professors that they have plagiarized others' works seriously undermines the public trust in intellectual integrity. Last but not least, scholars lacking in professional integrity exert a bad influence on young students, who followed the trend instead of pursuing innovation.
It is more than necessary that all the relevant departments join in the efforts to fight against this notorious phenomenon. As to the administrations concerned, it is high time for them to take effective measures to curb the misconduct and encourage creativity in academic field. Moreover, it is crucial for the government to oversee the work of researchers. Only when every member of the society realizes the harm brought by academic dishonesty can we put an end to the abominable practice.
>>亮点词汇 ①block v.阻碍
②confession n.承认，坦白 ③plagiarize v.抄袭，剽窃 ④undermine v.破坏,损害
⑤exert a bad influence on对??造成不好的影响 ⑥oversee v.监管
⑦abominable a.令人憎恶的，恶劣的
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>>文章点评
第一段点明文章论述的问题，即学术上的弄虚作假，同时指出这个问题日趋严重，引起越来越多的关注。
第二段列举了这一现象的危害。第一，它阻碍了国家的科学发展；第二，一些颇有声望的教授剽窃他人著作，降低了公众学术的可信任度；第三，这种学者对年轻学生有很坏的影响。第二点中that引导同位语从句解释说明confession的内容，第三点中who引导定语从句修饰young students，多种从句的使用使句子更为紧凑严谨。
最后一段提出措施，建议相关部门采取行动遏制这种风气，鼓励学术界的创造性，而且政府也应加强对研究工作的监管。末句使用Only引导的倒装句增强表达效果。
2011年6月六级预测作文--大学生职业选择
>>大学生的职业选择
1.一些大学生认为职业选择应该以符合兴趣为出发点 2.也有大学生认为应该看是否有好的发展前景 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
On the Choice of Career
In recent years, there is no consensus of opinions among college students about choice of career. Some students are in favor of the view that when choosing a job, interest plays the key part and should be thought about firstly; while others take a completely different side, firmly believing that prosperity is more worthwhile.
People holding the first view think that interest will result in more happiness and satisfaction at work, with which they could work in a more relaxing way and make progress more easily. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression due to lack of interest. However, holders of the second view argue that one should pay more attention to the career prosperity while making a choice, which will surely lead to prosperity of a person himself sooner or later. Therefore, they believe that it is career prosperity that counts most.
Personally, I deem that prosperity is the right element to think about because career prosperity can bring about one's success both in career and in life. In this sense, only career prosperity can bring a person happiness and satisfaction in the long run.
>>亮点词汇
①consensus n. 一致意见 ②be in favor of支持，赞同 ③prosperity n.发展前途
④worthwhile a.有价值的，值得的 ⑤satisfaction n.满足感
⑥suffer from遭受??之苦 ⑦depression n.抑郁，沮丧情绪 ⑧count v.很重要，有价值 ⑨in the long run从长远来看 >>文章点评
第一段提出职业选择问题，指出大学生对此问题有不同的观点和态度。第二句中连词that引导同位语从句，解释说明view的内容；分号后由连词while 引起对比，并使用believing引导的分词结构作伴随状语。
第二段对两种不同的观点进行分析。第一种认为大学生择业应该以兴趣为出发点，因为这样可以在工作中获得更多的愉悦和满足感；第二种认为职业选择应该更注重发展前景，理由是有前景的工作可以使个人有更好的发展。末句使用了六级写作加分句型——强调句，句子结构为“It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+其余部分”。例如：It is my parents who have put so much pressure on me.（给我施加如此多压力的人是我的父母。）
第三段阐述自己的观点，提出职业前景应该是职业选择中更被注重的内容，因为从长远来看，只有具有职业前景的工作才能给人带来幸福感和满足感。末句使用only位于句首的部分倒装结构，为六级写作亮点句型。
2011年6月四级预测作文--公务员热
>>公务员热
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1.近年来人们纷纷参加公务员考试 2.公务员考试带来的社会弊端 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
Civil Servant Craze
Some people think working as a civil servant is the best way to maintain a stable life. And this belief motivates millions of people to take civil servant examination. Deep in my heart, I also have been asking myself the same question again and again: why do I have little interest in civil servant examination? The reasons, in my mind, can be summed up in three aspects.
First of all, it is a waste of time and money for both the nation and the candidates to arrange or prepare for the civil servant examination. In the second place, the unbelievably high ratio of the applicants to the posts may lead to the government corruption. Last but not least, it is unreasonable for people to plunge into taking the examination without reflecting on their own strengths and weaknesses.
Such an attitude, I firmly believe, will help me embark on the right track of both job-hunting and my future life. To sum up, it is not advisable for the job-seekers to take civil servant examination blindly. In addition, the society and government should offer more job opportunities so that people have a wider range of job choices.
>>亮点词汇
①the ratio of??的比率 ②corruption n. 腐败
③plunge into突然或仓促地开始某事 ④embark on着手/开始干某事 ⑤blindly ad.盲目地 >>文章点评
第一段指出人们纷纷参加公务员考试，因为他们认为公务员是一个保持生活稳定的工作。最后一句提出了作者的不同态度，引出第二段。
第二段主要阐述考试大军挤独木桥的弊端。例如：国家和个人都要耗费时间和金钱来组织、准备考试；应试者和岗位的悬殊比例可能导致政府腐败；大家不考虑自身实际，盲目考试等。
最后一段指出自己的态度将有助于求职及未来的人生之路。接着提出了针对公务员热的相应措施，以求树立人们理性的求职观。本段首句I firmly believe为插入语，增强表达效果，末句使用so that引导的目的状语从句，增加句式的变化。
2011年6月六级预测作文--志愿者活动
>>大学生志愿者活动
1.越来越多的大学生从事志愿者活动 2.大学生志愿者活动的意义 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
On Volunteering Activities
In recent years, there has been a growing popularity of volunteering activities. The volunteering spirit is spreading among college students. They have been taking part in various volunteering work actively, such as rescue work in earthquakes and service work in the World Expo 2010 Shanghai.
There is no doubt that volunteering activities are of remarkable benefits to both society and the volunteers themselves. On the one hand, college students active participation in volunteering activities not only helps those in need but also calls on more people to join them, which influences the society in a positive way. On the other hand, engaged in volunteering activities, college students can also gain a lot more than they devote. In this sense,
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it is volunteering work that enables students to learn the importance of devoting spirit, which contributes to their all-round development.
As a college student, I think volunteering activities should be greatly advocated. In the process of participating, we can develop our humanism spirit and cooperative ability, which are essential in our growth.
>>亮点词汇
①rescue n.救援，营救
②remarkable a.值得注意的，不寻常的 ③call on号召
④engage in参与，参加
⑤devote v.为??付出时间/努力等，专心致力于 ⑥all-round development 全面发展 ⑦advocate v.主张，拥护 ⑧participate v.参与，参加
⑨humanism n.人道主义，人本主义 ⑩cooperative a.(乐意)合作的
11.essential a.绝对重要的，必不可少的 >>文章点评
第一段提到，随着志愿活动的宣传和发展，越来越多的人，特别是大学生，积极投身到志愿活动当中。末句使用现在完成进行时态，表示一直以来都在进行的动作，并暗示这一动作还将继续进行下去。
第二段从两个方面分析志愿活动的重要意义。一方面，大学生参与志愿活动不但能帮助有需要的人，而且能够号召更多的人参与其中；另一方面，通过参与志愿活动，大学生自身也能得到锻炼和提高，还能更好地理解助人为乐和奉献精神。第一句使用there is no doubt that句型，表达的意义是“毫无疑问??”。此外，末句不但使用了强调句型，同时还使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，是本文的一个亮点。
第三段阐述自己的观点：大学生应该积极投身志愿活动，奉献社会，完善自我。
2011年6月四级预测作文--拒绝醉酒驾驶
>>拒绝醉酒驾驶
1.社会上存在着酒后驾驶现象 2.酒后驾驶的危害
3.解决酒后驾驶问题的措施 >>范文背诵
On Drunken Driving
It is commonly known that drunken driving is a taboo to drivers, for alcohol can penetrate into people's blood, affect their brain and lead to traffic accidents. However, many drivers today drive even when they are intoxicated, either for their personal habits or for business reasons.
Drunken driving can be very disastrous. For one thing, it can bring about disasters to the victims, who are either killed or severely injured in the accidents. For another, it is harmful to the driver himself, and the driver should at least be partly responsible for it. Furthermore, drunken driving jeopardizes the security and stability of the society.
There are many ways to reduce drunken driving. Firstly, there should be a provision in the law to prevent people from driving when they are drunk. Secondly, the mass media should also play a role in publicizing the hazards of drunken driving as well as in educating people to obey the traffic rules. Last but not least, the drivers should establish a strong sense of responsibility for others as well as for themselves. After all, life is the most important.
>>亮点词汇
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①penetrate v.穿透，渗透 ②intoxicated a.喝醉的 ③jeopardize v.危害
④provision n.规定，条款 ⑤hazard n.危险，危害 >>文章点评
文章第一段说明醉酒驾车是驾驶人的一大禁忌，因为酒精可以渗入血液，影响大脑的清醒度，导致交通事故的发生，但还是有很多人酒后驾车。
第二段论述酒后驾驶的危险。一方面，酒后驾驶给受害者带来灾难，或死或伤；另一方面，酒后驾驶对驾驶人自己来说也是危险的；再者，酒后驾驶破坏社会的安全和稳定。
第三段说明减少酒后驾驶的方法。颁布法律，禁止人们酒后驾车；大众媒体发挥其职能，宣传酒后驾驶的危害，教育人们遵守交通规则；驾驶人要树立强烈的责任感，对他人、对自己负责。
2011年6月六级预测作文--坚持还是放弃
>>坚持还是放弃
1.有人认为坚持不懈，永不放弃的品格最可贵 2.有人认为善于选择，适时放弃最重要 3.我的观点 >>范文背诵
Perseverance or Giving Up
In present society, every individual makes an endeavor to pursue a higher living standard, and on the road to it, it's inevitable to be confronted with the crossing road in life. Thus perseverance or giving up is a common dilemma we meet in daily life.
Some people put a high value on perseverance, never giving up. It is self-evident that perseverance contributes to success. So those people hold that if you feel like victory, you are supposed to be persistent on what you are clinging to. However, there are people who pay more attention to being capable of choosing and giving up in due course. From their perspective, opportunities will disappear in a blink and it's a waste of time if you still stick to it when there seems to be no hope.
As I see it, both are of vital significance. We should persevere in what we have chosen and give up what is unrealistic. Only in this way, can we cultivate an aggressive and rational character and achieve a bright future.
>>亮点词汇 ①endeavor n.努力 ②inevitable a.不可避免的 ③the crossing road十字路 ④perseverance n.坚持不懈 ⑤dilemma n.困境，两难的境地 ⑥be supposed to应该 ⑦persistent a.坚持的，执意的 ⑧cling to 抓住
⑨in due course 在适当的时候
⑩aggressive a.有进取心的，有冲劲的 11.rational a.理性的 >>文章点评
第一段指出在人生的十字路口上，选择坚持还是放弃成为一个难题。
第二段前半部分阐述为什么有些人赞成坚持不懈，他们认为只有坚持才能成功。后半部分阐述为什么另一些人认为要适时放弃，对他们而言，善于选择更加重要，发现自己追求的目标不现实时应该及时放弃。第三句为多重复合句，其中主句中包含that引导的宾语从句，而宾语从句中又包含if引导的条件状语从句，同时what引导的从句为介词on的宾语从句。
第三段表明自己的观点，即定好目标后就要认真坚持，努力去实现。但是，一旦发现目标不切实际，则应及时放弃。
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末句为only引导的倒装句式。
2011年6月四级预测作文--社会信任危机
>>社会信任危机
1.人们之间的信任度下降，出现社会信任危机 2.社会信任危机造成的不良影响 3.我认为合适的解决方法有哪些 >>范文背诵
Loss of Social Trust
With the development of national economy, a worrying social problem also arises--people gradually trust each other less and less, especially among strangers.
This phenomenon will bring many unfavorable consequences. First and foremost, people will lose a lot of fun since they become cautious all the time. What makes matters worse, the general expense of doing things rises abruptly as a result of the fact that people don't want to help strangers. Finally, if this matter is not properly settled, it will pose a threat to the national education.
It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly. For one thing, the government should make all efforts to create a harmonious social atmosphere. For another, teachers should seize every chance to stimulate affection in the hearts of the students. Finally, the mass media should also play a positive role in restoring mutual trust.
No matter whether this problem is a natural result of social development, it is important that we find a satisfactory solution to it in this transitional period.
>>亮点词汇
①abruptly ad.突然地；意外地 ②pose a threat to对??构成威胁 ③seize every chance to抓住每个机会 ④stimulate v.鼓励，激励 ⑤mutual trust相互信任 ⑥transitional a.过渡期的 >>文章点评
第一段指出随着经济增长，出现了一个令人担忧的社会问题，即人与人之间的信任度降低。
第二段点明这一现象带来的不良后果，并分三方面进行阐述。首先，人们的生活将会失去很多乐趣；其次，办事的基本开支将会增加；另外，这一问题将会威胁到国民教育。
第三段从政府、教师与媒体三个角度提出解决问题的办法。政府应该努力创造和谐的社会氛围；教师应该激发学生的关爱精神；媒体应该起到积极的影响。第四段使用No matter引导的方式状语从句做总结。
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