can receive your reply by April 15th,2017.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely，

Li Hua

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(2017·福建师大附中期中)

假设你是李华，刚结束学校安排的“加拿大之旅”返回福州。请给你在加拿大时接待家庭的主人Johnson夫妇写一封信，主要内容包括： 1.你已安全返回福州； 2.感谢他们的盛情款待和照顾； 3.希望他们有时间来福州游玩。 注意：

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2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson，

Best wishes!

Yours truly，

Li Hua

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Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson， I’m writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Fuzhou.Thanks to your hospitality，I had a wonderful time in Canada.

It was my first time to go abroad and I was naturally a bit nervous when I first arrived.The first time I saw you at the airport，I knew from your warm smile that everything would be all right.With your help，I visited so many places of interest in Canada，of which I have good memories.In addition，what has impressed me most is your motherly care when I was ill，which made me feel at home.

I hope someday you will come to visit Fuzhou and I can return your kindness. Best wishes!

Yours truly， Li Hua

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Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson，

I’m writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Fuzhou.Thanks to your hospitality，I had a wonderful time in Canada.

①It was the first time that I had gone abroad (这是我第一次出国) and I was naturally a bit nervous when I first arrived.The first time I saw you at the airport，I knew from your warm smile that everything would be all right.With your help，I visited so many places of interest in Canada，of which I have good memories.In addition，when I was ill，②it is your motherly care that has impressed me most(你慈母般的关怀给我留下了深刻的印象；用强调句型)，③making me feel at home(使我感觉像在家一样；用非谓语动词).

I hope someday you will come to visit Fuzhou and I can return your kindness. Best wishes!

Yours truly，