分类突破(一) 提纲作文
解题指导
提纲类作文是高考试题中最为常见的书面表达命题方式之一,通常会以中文、英文、中文+英文、文字+表格、文字+图片等不同的形式给出要点,并要求考生根据所列要点组织语言,将所列要点完整、清晰地表达出来。需要注意以下几点:
1.仔细研读题目。确定所写文章的主题、人称、时态及写作内容等。
2.分析整合要点。对所给要点进行分析并重新整合,适当进行细节扩展。重新整合信息是为了根据要点间的逻辑关系和相似性等将信息分为若干部分。
3.确定文章体裁。根据题目要求及要点的特征来进一步确定文章的体裁,根据要点的逻辑关系来确定文章的整体框架和具体段落,并根据重新整合的信息来确定每个段落的具体内容。 4.斟酌具体表达。根据要点的关键词来确定所用的具体词汇及搭配。根据要点的内容及确立的文体特点来选择使用何种句型。根据文体信息选择合适的句型、适时地交叉使用不同的句型。
实战演练
(一)
(2017·广东广州一模)
假定你是李华,是学生会主席。你校将于5月25日至30日在广州沙面举行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容给姐妹学校剑桥中学(Cambridge High School)写一封邀请信。内容要点如下: 1.写信目的;
2.活动时间、地点和意义; 3.回复时间:2017年4月15日前。 注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam,
Sincerely,
构思要 请写出要点提纲
Li Hua
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范文赏析
欣赏并背诵满分作文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua,president of our Students’ Union.I am much honored to inform you of the exciting news that a Dragon Boat Race will be organized by our school.On behalf of our school,I am writing to invite all your faculty and students to be the participants and audience of this activity.
The Dragon Boat Race,in memory of the great poet,Qu Yuan,will be held in Shamian,Guangzhou,from May 25th to 30th.Not only will it enrich our campus life but also greatly motivate our passion for Chinese culture.Additionally,it’s a precious opportunity to promote the interaction/friendship between the two schools.
I would appreciate it if you could be our distinguished guest of this activity.And hopefully,we can receive your reply by April 15th,2017.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely, Li Hua 作文升级
依据括号内提示改写满分作文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua,president of our Students’ Union.①I have the honor to inform you of the exciting news(我很荣幸地通知你们这个激动人心的消息) that a Dragon Boat Race will be organized by our school.②I,representing our school,am writing to invite all your faculty and students to participate in this activity(我代表我们学校写信邀请你们全体师生参加这次活动).
The Dragon Boat Race,in memory of the great poet,Qu Yuan,will be held in Shamian,Guangzhou,from May 25th to 30th.③It will greatly motivate our passion for Chinese culture as well as enrich our campus life (这不但会丰富我们的学校生活,而且极大地激发我们对中国文化的热爱;用as well as).Additionally,it’s a precious opportunity to promote the interaction/friendship between the two schools.
I would appreciate it if you could be our distinguished guest of this activity.And hopefully,we