Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear from you and learn that you are planning to set up a Chinese reading club on your school web.It is really cool.I think it is a good idea to post the relevant information on the Internet,which is helpful for people to know about your club.What’s more,you can put up some posters on your campus to attract students’ attention.Also,organizing some reading activities and exchanging what one has gained from the reading will help arouse people’s interest in your club.
I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you and your reading club can be a great success.
Yours, Li Hua
【范文点评】本文使用了大量的固定短语,如:set up,put up,attract one’s
attention,arouse one’s interest,be of help等,让人眼前一亮。同时,恰当使用了过渡连接词如also,what’s more以及复合句如非限制性定语从句、宾语从句等,使得文章一气呵成。
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